My life journey

 Capital = CORRECTION ~x~=remove 1.First and foremost, many of us prefer money over family if we have to pick between those things. It is hard to survive and make yourself satisfied if you (DO NOT)~don't~ have a lot of money. It is start already hard as it is,(TO START)~starting~ a family would double the burden and require~s~ more money since you have to feed not only yourself, but your other household MEMBERS too. 2.In conclusion, there('s) (A) good choice or a top priority among the young people. However, it is up to each individual to choose whether to get ~early married~(MARRIED EARLIER) or late(R) married and bear all the risk(s) ~by~(on) their own. 3.

 First and foremost , I'm very bad at starting essay,so I just follow the essay situation and ask how to the question itself , assume that I use 5H1W for just introduction. Second , I don't very familliar with  discourse marker  (penanda wacana). I don't really take serious with grammar , the only way of solving the grammar issue by writing words that is suitable be speaked of!I always try my best to exceed the minimum words like 250 in SPM , so I just elaborate on and on..Somehow I managed to get A- for english xD As a summary , I hope I can perform in form 6 by doing madam's exercise so that I can flex my justin bieber accent in future.

 ~ x~=underline(wrong answer) #1 NOUNS 1 a/an   A book=1  book=??false                                 >1 + s     books=>1   a books = ?? false - #2 VERBS     1 + s he/she/the boy HAS(+s)/~have~ #Except for  >1 -s They/we/the boys ~has~/HAVE "you" & "I"    - #3 PROCESS B5 + P2      B5 = am/is/are - was/were 1 PEOPLE = IS      She/he IS playing soccer.  >1=ARE                 They/we ARE playing soccer. - #4 PASSIVE (Songsang) B5 + P4 Nur sang a song. Ps : A song WAS/~were~ singed by Nur. (1= was)     = A song was sung by Nur. X kissed Y. ( 1 people so +s) was= we change the meaning X kissed by Y yesterday . The underlined one is victim Y was kissed by X. (2 = were)  Z and Y were kissed by X. - #5 PERFECT 3H+P4 Present=ha...

       It is a responsibility for parents to cherish,take care of their children by the time he/she born in the world and continuing growing up,for some people that's very fascinating and admirable, but youth nowadays tends to priorities other thing  than having happy family.The question is,do youth really care about marrying?      As a human being,its normal for everyone to have their own "lust" toward opposite gender and WANT to have a child,well in Islam,in order to do sex,you need to have halal relation between your partner that is by getting married.Why?You may ask,because there are some people in this world that go make such thing and forget their future responsibility that is taking care of the child you made,I always saw news about kid surviving on their own without the parents NOT because they passed away,but the kid not getting cared all,and second it's against with our religion.      Money,the main character of this issue...

  Money is something that controls our whole live,the more money you have,the easier the way you live. We all know this yet many of us fall into the traps of debt and overspending without even knowing it.Thus,it is very important to know the importance of good money management. First and foremost , money can buy time . For example when you have a fever, it might take a long time to get checked by a doctor if you went to government hospital ,which is free and due to that many people will go here as like the benefit given so this will create crowd , meanwhile when you go to clinic you will get checked by doctor very fast as you paid for it,so this is the clarification that I've meant by saying money can buy time. Second , when you have good money management you will be ready for future problem,for example just 2 years ago,COVID-19 exists and cause people to lose work,can't do business by how the virus works ,thing gets expensive and so on. Overall I think as a family we should ha...

  Thank you very much to Ashrizal as he spent out his own time helping me to finish this task. Here is the link : Youtube link And our dialog is here : A : Hi I'm here from Xiangling TV , today I'm here to interview about your current situation which we heard that  your daughter "Shiloh" sadly passed away. Let's talk at somewhere else. What's the real story?My condolences for you of course.Did she died peacefully or in a bad way?Heartfelt thoughts go out to you in this time of sorrow. B : Actually I'm not involved in this but as a head of the family . I'll continue to do this . - As a summary , my wife asking for help with her friends to take care of our daughter as she are experiencing less worker in her pastry shop. Her friend name is "Hasem",we heard that our daughter was unconscious by STRANGLING herself with curtain , I'm as a father very angry with her friend as she didn't take full responsibility babysitting. A :That's very...